I have been away for a while – but am back – and will be sharing some of my poetry…
The VIP Room
‘The builder of the nation is dead.
But he was old,’
they said.
On the 6th floor, in the VIP room
Of our National flagship hospital
He lay.
6 weeks
he waited for his hip to be fixed
only to be
buried with it untouched!
‘The builder of the nation is dead.
But he was old,’
they said.
Waiting 3 days
For the physician to come
and then have the surgeon disappear –
To a conference, they say.
His health ebbed away,
As he lay on his back.
Then his stomach ached.
So they cut him open
And stitched up his gut
His hip still untouched
The builder of the nation is dead
But he was old,
They said.
On the 6th floor, in the VIP room
Of our National flagship hospital
He lay.
‘Here, take this blood
QUICK to that lab in town
It will do tests we need!
We rush around, vials of blood in our bags
to get the results they need.
There is a lab
In the Flagship you know
But mostly it does not work
Results in hand
We rush back to the room
But the Dr only returns the next day!
The head nurse refuses to give
Sterilized hospital bedding,
‘Washing machines destroy them, you know.
Ward X has none left, for they used the machines
– but I still have all my sheets!’
I look at the nurse who
starts her ward round at 11,
takes blood samples hours after the doctor’s request!
Bile rises inside
but as I open my mouth to speak
someone says…
‘Don’t antagonize the nurse ,
Be grateful that she is here.’
‘The builder of the nation is dead.
But he was old,’
they said.
In the VIP room on the 6th floor, of our
National flagship hospital
We love him and pray for him
It is all we can do
Impotent against a complacent system
that is grateful for crumbs!
Slowly he starts slipping away
He vomited all last night
(in the VIP room on the 6th floor
of the national flagship hospital),
But the nurses would not come
‘Too many patients,’,they said
‘And at least you are there.’
As the sun drew over the horizon
His vomit turned to blood
And still no nurse came.
So we took out our phones
And called the doctors we knew.
‘Please come,’ we cried
To the VIP room, on the 6th floor
Of our national flagship.
‘We really do not know what to do!’
Off to ICU he goes
And still no sterilized sheets.
‘Bring his blankets and pillows too –
And take off your shoes when you come in!’
Early Sunday morning
The ward phone rings and
a nurse comes round the door
‘They want one of you to go
to ICU,
they need to talk to you’
I hurry and dress
For I am young and quick
And when I enter
I see
The builder of the nation is gone
And his nation staggers along.
WOW…! Painfully strong and indicting…
A tragic way for the builder of the nation to have died. It continues to stagger, as you say – it staggers and reels – drunk on greed and injustice. Extremely refreshing and very much in Daddy’s own style. He would have chuckled I know….
This is a painful indictment of our systems and a very concise message. Thank you.
Aaaaahhhhh. This one is soooo sad 😦 The builders of the nation deserve soooo much more than those that usually get it all.